Beginner here, made this poster for fun. Also seeking advice

So I saw the original picture on Twitter and immediately thought I have to make something out of it and this is what i came up with. I didn't really have anything in my mind when making this but the vision was to use lots of gothic aesthetics and latin texts. The "Summum Voti" is a song title from a certain video game and the paragraphs in the middle are the lyrics, I figured the meaning of the song kinda matched the vibe I was going for so I just went with it.

I feel some parts like the rose and sumerian signature are kinda awkward but I don't really know how to fix it. I also think it still lacks something, like it's not interesting enough. I was thinking of adding paper textures and inverted overlay effects but I'm not sure if it'll ruin the poster or not.

Feel free to tell me if I there are any mistakes tho, I'm still learning and it would be nice to know where I'm doing things right. Thanks!